Jawad, you have created an interesting image to go with your cross-country story. You are becoming a detailed writer, who includes your thoughts and actions to create a picture in your reader's head. I enjoyed the feeling you left at the end about your friends.
Jawad, you have created an interesting image to go with your cross-country story. You are becoming a detailed writer, who includes your thoughts and actions to create a picture in your reader's head. I enjoyed the feeling you left at the end about your friends.
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